Wednesday, 4 January 2017

Opening scene - Montage and scene storyboard


These 12 shots and different examples of some of the shots we will be focusing on for he Montage in the opening scene of the film. The man, appears to take girls teeth, so the use of the kidney dish for example is kept for putting all the teeth in that he has extracted from girls


These 6 shots are for the opening scene including the moving drama. It starts of with a title. It then leads on to clip, of the woods. The camera then elevated to a high shot and the colour of the sky and the ceiling of the brick room so that when the camera is lowered, it is in a room. In the room here is a girl that is all bandaged up.


There is then a POV shot through the mans mask. He is looking around for utensils. There girl bandaged can be seen and clues for him finding the girls and some of their possessions.
Lastly, there is a close up of the shelved and the man take a jar full of teeth.




Storyboard writing for the montage

1

What happens: a close up of one of the girls faces wrapped up in a bandage. Only her eyes are visible. At first they are shown to be closed and then they suddenly open.

Shot: extreme close up

Sound: when the girl’s eyes open a fast paced heart beat starts

Dialogue: muffled panicking but no speaking

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

2

What happens: a close up of a pair of plyers that is used in order to take the teeth out of the young victim’s mouths.

Shot: extreme close up

Sound: the lullaby softly starts to play in the background.

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal, in the brick room.

On screen for (s);5 seconds

 

3

What happens: a close up of a syringe that is filled with blood. It is then pressed and then blood starts dripping from it.  

Shot: extreme close up

Sound: dripping blood sound, the lullaby is playing in the background of the montage.

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

4

What happens: A table is filled with a range of different features either from the girls or some of their possessions, such as photos of them, a hair lock, lockets and bus passes.

Shot: close up

Sound: lullaby, the beating heart, heavy breathing.

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

5

What happens: This scene shows a zoomed up version of some of the girl’s photos and possessions. Some of the images are crossed out identifying girls the man has already taken.

Shot: close up

Sound: lullaby, heart beat in the background, heavy breathing continues.

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

6

What happens: There is a close up of a kidney dish that has blood and teeth in the middle of it. Some of the credits come up on the screen.

Shot: extreme close up

Sound: footsteps, and the lullaby, and heartbeat in the background.

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

7

What happens: splashes of blood are shown on the floor and this could possibly be from the victims teeth extractions

Shot: a close up

Sound: dripping blood from the syringe, the soft lullaby, heart beating

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

8

What happens: A POV shot of the man’s vision that would be through his mask. This shows photos hanging from the ceiling of the girls and some of their possessions. One side also shows a shelf full of his weird things and possessions such as a hair and teeth jar.

Shot: Long shot from the mask

Sound: Very heavy breathing, lullaby

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

9

What happens: A flock of birds flying away through the sky

Shot: Long shot

Sound: bird flying away, lullaby

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: External

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

10

What happens: A latex glove is being put on by the antagonist, and stretched to fit.

Shot: Extremely close up

Sound: rubber stretching sound, lullaby

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

11

What happens: A chair with a lot of blood dripping down it.

Shot: A mid shot

Sound: dripping blood, lullaby in the background

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

12

What happens: The protagonist is clenching a piece of material that is supposedly the side of the hair as her tooth is being taken out.

Shot: Extreme close up

Sound: screaming girls, the lullaby

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5 seconds 

Opening scene

Writing to do underneath the story board

 

1)

What happens: The title appears on the screen following through from the montage.

Shot: No shot. Title screen

Sound: Scratching noise within the background. Hint of the lullaby to show they are related

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: N/A

On screen for (s); 5 seconds

 

2)

What happens: (setting) in a gloomy forest I the daytime. Scene shows the mid shot. The camera then elevates upwards to a high shot to show he grey sky.

Shot: Mid shot

Sound: Birds squawking I the background, when the ceiling, heart beat starts

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 10 seconds

 

3)

What happens: the grey and dark ceiling is shown that leads on from the following scene. It then levitates back down to a mid-shot of a girl in a chair.

Shot: High shot, to a mid-shot when levitated

Sound: heavy breathing room he man, girl panicking

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5-10 seconds

 

4)

What happens: shot of a girl in the chair.. She is completely bandaged up, the only thing showing is her eyes.

Shot: Mid shot

Sound: heavy breathing, panicking, heartbeat

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s);3-5 seconds

 

5)

What happens: POV through the man’s mask. Shows the girl, and his messy weird shelves. Shot: Long shot

Sound: more intense breathing

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 10 seconds

 

6)

What happens: A close up of the shelves. He then reaches for the teeth jar.

Shot: Mid shot/ close up

Sound: footsteps

Dialogue: N/A

Internal/ external: Internal

On screen for (s); 5-10 seconds

 

 

 

 


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